My Tuesday Talk Guest - A. J. Trevors
author of 'Birth of Hope: The Gaia Chronicles'
‘This is hell’
Those were the
first words that popped into my mind halfway through re-writing my novel for
the millionth time. I stared at my computer long and hard, tired eyes drooping
as if Father Time was throwing sand on my eyelids by the spadeful. The
sickening white glare of the screen washed over me, giving my skin an unhealthy
pale tinge.
With fury, I
stood up and flung my laptop at the wall and proceeded to shout “FU-”
Nah, I’m just
playing with you guys. What’s up?!
My name is Andy
James Trevors and I’m a newly-minted author with a fresh fantasy/sci-fi novel
out entitled ‘Birth of Hope: The Gaia Chronicles’. In this post, I will be
sharing with you lovely people about my writing journey, all the ups and downs
and the valleys in between.
First off,
writing is not easy. There is no set formula for doing it. No copy and paste
format in which all successful novels are written. If there were, everyone
would become the next George R.R. Martin or J.K. Rowling!
No, writing is
not easy. However, anything that is not easy usually is the most rewarding at
the end of the journey. To start off with, since my novel is of the
fantasy/sci-fi genre, I had to flex my brain muscles to come up with an
original fantasy idea that hasn’t been done before. On top of that, there is
the sci-fi component as well, which writers have to be very careful about. You
don’t want it to be too much of a space opera, like Star Wars, or too filled
with technical jargon, like Star Trek. There must either be a balance between
the two, or a new avenue in which sci-fi could be written.
In the case of
my novel, the original fantasy idea I chose was the theme of summoning beasts
or creatures. Not very ‘original’, per se, but what I realised was that there
is a dearth of summoner novels out there in the market and this theme will help
‘Birth of Hope’ stand out from the other fantasy novels. It helps that I am
also a huge fan of this theme, being an avid ex-Pokemon and Digimon player,
among other things.
As for the
sci-fi component, the key issue that I identified was that most sci-fi novels,
with respect to all the authors out there that have written one, is that they
never explore planets in depth. Planets in sci-fi universes were akin to towns
or other countries, where there was only one city or a smattering of villages
in one planet, with no other development evident on the said planet. I felt
that there should be a novel where one planet has multiple environments, as it
should! The Earth has varying environments, from desserts to bogs to cramped
cities. Why can’t other planets in the sci-fi universe be the same?
Hence, the
subtitle ‘The Gaia Chronicles’, meaning that all the events in ‘Birth of Hope’
take place on the planet Gaia, with different environments at play, from the
sand dunes of the Tahiba Desert to the tall, snowy peaks of the Cygnus
Mountains.
All of this
research, along with stringing the storyline and creating characters, took
about three months to complete. That’s when the writing begins. At the start, I
aimed to complete at least one chapter in one week. I would start my day at
around seven in the morning and write for two hours until nine before I catch
the bus to university. However, I soon began to realise that, by the time I got
to university, I exercised my brain bone so hard that I couldn’t concentrate in
my lectures.
I changed my writing time to seven in the evening until nine at night. That way, I was relaxed when I started writing, with the strenuous tasks of the day behind me and only the warm comfort of my bed ahead of me.
Writing the
first draft was fine. It was when re-writing occurred that I felt the stress
levels ratchet up. Many authors will tell you that it is in the re-writing
phase where patience must be applied and applied well. Your manuscript, when
completed, will look radically different from your first draft when you just
began writing your novel There will be characters that you delete, new
characters created, events changed, climaxed shifted, different endings,
villains that perish then resurrected, new weapons, fight scenes, love
triangles. The whole works. It will be
so different that, when you read the finished product, you will wonder what you
planned to write in the first place.
However, one
must not equate having a different finished product to having an inferior
novel. The things that you change during the re-writing stage are incredibly
crucial to writing your novel. It has the potential to make or break it. Thus,
I cannot stress enough how important it is for every potential writer to
rewrite what they have already written. You cannot make your novel worse during
this period. You can only make it better.
Joy.
Peace. Fear. Death. Hope. To many, these are just emotions, facial expressions
or words that are evoked in the face of numerous situations. However, there are
a select few in the galaxy that have the power to wield them into something
more. Into a weapon. Into a personification of their inner being.
They
are called Spectres.
Damien
is one such person. With the Spectre Hope, he will shoulder the hopes of the
galaxy as he strikes out on an epic adventure that will bring readers to all
four corners of the planet, Gaia. From the peaks of Mount Cygnus to the
sand-blasted plains of the Tahiba Dessert, Damien and his group of friends will
try to find a way to end the war with the merciless Vangarians and unlock the
secrets hidden within the depths of their hearts.
Cheers,
A.J. Trevors
Is writing really Hell? Yes, it often is. Happily, there are pauses and times of slump and reprieve. However, as Sartre said, there is "No Exit."
ReplyDeleteSo, keep writing, A.J.
And you, Helen, keep bringing us Indie talents from these different universes.
Thanks Inge - Writing can be hell when you're desperately trying to get a scene to go right, the laundry needs attending to, the dishes need doing and your daughter asks you to come and help with the horses - that's my arghhh! moment. Mind you, I confess to ignoring the dishes and laundry!
DeleteHi Inge! Thanks so much for the encouragement :) I will definitely keep writing for as long as I live! hahaha :D
DeleteThis piece was truly inspirational! I am in the middle of revisions HELL with my novel and I feel like I'm playing whack-a-mole with the plot: if I change one tiny thing here, 50 things there there and there need to be tweaked - or completely rewritten. Good job getting through it and getting published!
ReplyDeleteOh tell me about it Meredith! Just been through that myself with my next one (On The Account) due out soon. You _must_ get someone else to read it through - for Bring It Close I took out the red herrings because I realised there were too many 'clues' to the final twist. What I hadn't realised until my editor pointed it out, I'd taken them ALL out!
DeleteHi Meredith! Thanks so much for the encouragement! :) It was crazy but worth it :D Don't hesitate to contact me if you need any help! :D
DeleteI too understand the effort involved.
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